Interested in what some I'll read it! clients had to say
about the services they received?

(All comments used with permission.)
(And no payments were made for these endorsements.)  ; )
references
"I sent my manuscript to Donna Fleisher, not knowing what to expect but hoping it would
help. The feedback I received on paper and tape was priceless—worth every penny and
then some. Her expert criticism, sandwiched with a healthy dose of encouragement,
made a huge difference not only in that manuscript, but in the whole way I write."
Jenness Walker, Hobe Sound, Florida



"Donna Fleisher is a terrific editor. She understands writers and will love your story
almost as much as you do, which is to say she will take the time to help you see it for
what it is. She will show you its flaws as well as its strengths and give you concrete
suggestions for improvement. Donna is a warm human being, a talented and honest critic,
and a genuine delight to work with. Highly recommended."
Daniel Schwabauer



"I just finished my second listen to your tapes. You are right, there was no better way to
convey the information you needed me to have. You went above and beyond the call of
duty. You gave me something that may have taken me years to get elsewhere, if ever. . . .
I am halfway through Self-Editing for Fiction Writers. What a wake up call. I had so
many misconceptions about writing, and the business of writing. . . . What a miracle in
itself I found you. The fact that you have a military background and could help with those
aspects of the story is literally amazing. I never had the honor of serving our country in
the military. My area of expertise is the martial arts, the same described in the story. . . .
You have given me much to think about. At first I was overwhelmed. Now, I am excited.  
At least I have something to go by. A manuscript, even though raw, is something tangible.
I have something to work with."
C. A.,  Mississippi
"Donna Fleisher delivers exactly what she promises. Her passion for her work is
unmistakable and reassuring. I have no doubt that she truly cares about my story and my
mission to transform it into a novel. The cassette tapes are wonderful—not only a
recorded critique, but a writing class as well. I've read a couple of books on self-editing,
but didn't truly understand them in application until now. Not only did she give me an
honest assessment of my strengths and weaknesses, but probably saved me a lot of future
embarrassment as well. I look forward to working with her on future projects."
Dayle James Arceneaux, Gibson, Louisiana
Exodus 35:30-36:3

And Moses said to the
children of Israel, "See, the
LORD has called by name
Bezalel the son of Uri, the
son of Hur, of the tribe of
Judah; and He has filled him
with the Spirit of God, in
wisdom and understanding,
in knowledge and all manner
of workmanship, to design
artistic works, to work gold
and silver and bronze, in
cutting jewels for setting, in
carving wood, and to work in
all manner of artistic
workmanship.
And He has put in his heart
the ability to teach, in him
and Aholiab the son of
Ahisamach, of the tribe of
Dan. He has filled them with
skill to do all manner of
work of the engraver and the
designer and the tapestry
maker, in blue, purple, and
scarlet thread, and fine linen,
and of the weaver—those
who do every work and
those who design artistic
works.
And Bezalel and Aholiab,
and every gifted artisan in
whom the LORD has put
wisdom and understanding,
to know how to do all
manner of work for the
service of the sanctuary,
shall do according to all that
the LORD has commanded."
Then Moses called Bezalel
and Aholiab, and every
gifted artisan in whose heart
the LORD had put wisdom,
everyone whose heart was
stirred, to come and do the
work.
"I want to tell you how helpful I think you will be to me. I did read the Browne/King
editing book and had already taken out the 'tom swifties' —he said happily. But I didn't
really grasp the POV issue until your tapes. Your service is like getting a college course
from an excellent teacher for a lot less time and money, and not only that, but you
personalize your teaching to fit my needs and weaknesses. I would recommend your
service to anyone who is serious about sharpening his Christian-fiction-writing craft."
Craig Harris, Palestine, Texas
Donna's note: Congrats to C.A. (Craig Alexander)!
His book, The Nineveh Project, has been published by Breakneck Books!
Check it out here.